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2 I REALLY TRIED STARS!!!

First off, I love a good biker romance novel!!!! And I was hoping this would be one of those.... I tried to be really patient in reading this book... in the end, I'm just happy I finished it!

First, it needs serious editing, the grammar...

"His my finance."

- instead of " fiancé".

"You're not going back to belonging to him."

- seriously, huh?

"... you had stars in your eyes and a fight in your heart when you used looked at her" 

again, what?

"As I being walking towards him he doesn't even bat an eyelash at me."

- say what again?

and those are just the tip of the iceberg!!!!



I'm not very sensitive on book errors but when it's just way too many... it's frustrating.

I was about to quit cause it was giving me a headache. I went and double check the reviews and see all 5 stars! So I figured the story must be really really good right?

But to the end the story just went bonkers!!! The characters was ridiculous too!!!



Sex wasn't even hot....

Sorry, I don't want haters hating... so I'll just say, this book is NOT for me!

Props on the gritty parts, the plot could have been really good.... but that's about it for me!


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